One day in school our math teacher exploded and we were delighted that our teacher exloded because we can play the green drums and the tiny flute. We were sorry that we never brought in the tiny giraffe and we got a new maths teacher who was a rabbit and he can play the piano and nobody likes him because he has been bully. Every day of maths is a nightmare just knowing you are in the same room as the new bully. Why did our teacher explode why!!!!!!!!!
by James
Hi James,
Thanks for entering the 100 word challenge!
* You have used some fantastic connectives such as “because” and “who”!
* Your piece is very imaginative – I love the green drums and tiny flute!
* Your use of the word “nightmare” tells the reader exactly how you felt
W: Remember that a question word like “why” in your last sentence needs a question mark!
We hope to see you next week!
Miss Windsor (Team 100WC)
I am sorry for the teacher.