This morning we finalised the planning part of our Roald Dahl story for the competition.

We have been editing our story by removing unnecessary words also.

Can you Edit this passage to make it shorter, but keep all the important information?

“Mr Twit was wandering down the long, steep street to meet his ugly, horrible, smelly wife. She was wearing a dark brown old coat and was carrying a cane. She is a horrible person!”

leave your answers in the comments below.

In P.E. we are improving our technique for different fitness activities, including squat, plank, lunges, burpees.

We did a brutal fitness circuit which helped us improve our technique and made us fitter!