There’s an old oak,
In the middle
of the wood.
Slowly dying now.
One day,
a person came,
To try and nock him down.
Then came the red X,
And the big machines.
All is over for the big oak tree.
Hazel G
The Tallest Class in Banton Primary
There’s an old oak,
In the middle
of the wood.
Slowly dying now.
One day,
a person came,
To try and nock him down.
Then came the red X,
And the big machines.
All is over for the big oak tree.
Hazel G
I really like your commas. I also like your story and the red x in it just make it brilliant Great job 👍