There’s an old oak,

In the middle

of the wood.

Slowly dying now.

One day,

a person came,

To try and nock him down.

Then came the red X,

And the big machines.

All is over for the big oak tree.

Hazel G

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  1. I really like your commas. I also like your story and the red x in it just make it brilliant Great job 👍

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