The Invasion by Archie

Archie wrote the following story at home.  He read it  out to us in class and we though it was really good so we decided to publish it on the blog.  Mrs Stewart is hoping to start a writing blog for our class after the holidays.

One sunny day on Planet Earth lots of strange things started to happen.  There were alien  spaceships in fact.  Then monsters were falling from the sky.  All the people were running away screaming.  The monsters were walking through the houses.

The planes were zapping the people into dust and the dust was turning into nothing.  The monsters were tugging the people’s heads off.  Then Superman came to help them.

He was picking up the monsters and kicking the  aliens spaceships.  The monsters were back in the sky and the aliens were walking back to their spaceships.  Superman had saved the day!

4 thoughts on “The Invasion by Archie”

  1. I really enjoyed this story. Archie took great pride in writing it and reading it to us at home. I think this is a great idea and wonderful to see all the children’s work. Well done Primary 3 superstars and Mrs Stewart for all your hard work.
    (Archie’s Dad)

  2. What a great story; lucky that Superman saved the day. I’ll look forward to the writer’s blog!

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