Homework task: For Monday 3rd December
– UP LEVEL THE SENTENCE AT THE END OF THIS BLOG POST, AND COMMENT ON THIS POST
REMEMBER: Home baking for the Christmas Fayre tomorrow!!
This week, we’ve been developing the skill of UP-LEVELLING. With our 4 friends in writing- Vocabulary, Connectives, Openers and Punctuation- we’ve been having a go at turning simple sentences into fantastic pieces of work.
We’ve learned how to us:
– adjectives
– adverbs
– prepositional statements
– embedded clauses
With this, we can turn a simple sentence like:
A dog barked.
INTO
A ferocious dog, who was trying to catch the burglar, barked loudly through the hole in the fence.
Now, we want to put YOUR skills to the test. For Friday, we want YOU to up-level the sentence below. You have to add all 4 of the magic steps. Comment on the blog post!
Your sentence:
‘The wolf howled’
See you tomorrow,
Mr.Cook, Miss Grant and Mrs.Prentice
The fat oild wolf , who could hardly walk , howled softly under the moon.
see you at school :]
love all the sentences :}
The wolf howled.
The friendly wolf howled.
The friendly wolf howled,with his friend’s to the moon.
The friendly wolf howled,with his friend’s to the moon,like he was singing.
The friendly wolf howled,with his friend’s to the moon,on the top of the mountain all night.
the tierd wolf ,who was trying to get to sleep,was surrounded by trees in the forest.
😉
the scared wolf who lived in woods whimpered quietley
the cute wolf, who liked chocolate, who howled at 5
The hairy wolf, who was panting for breath, howled weakly in the forest.
The wolf howled in the darkness of the night because he got a scent of a strange beast
Deep in the scary forest, the shy wolf, who was called Fluffy, howled quietly.
the fierce wolf,whos name was smiley Jim Bob,howled softley at a bus stop
The angry wolf howled in the moonlight who scared the man away.
The wolf howled extraordinarily loudly,while we ate our pizza,on the coldest christmas eve.
The wolf that was looking for his supper howled loudly in the moonlight
The fluffy wolf,who is only three, howled quietly while sitting on it’s owner’s knee.
😀 😀
The wild wolf,that was scratching its claws fiercly on the tree,howoled at night.
The fierce wolf,who was creeping slowly up on his pray,through the dark wood howled noisily.
The fearsome wolf,who was trying to catch a bird,howled visously at the bird nest. :-):-):-):-):-)
The fierce wolf, in the dark cave,howeled
The dark wolf, hearing a noise in the gloomy forest, howled at the full moon.
The cute wolf,who was on holiday in Hawi,howled quietly in the midnight sky.
The fearsone wolf howled scarely under the sparkly moonlight.xx
The huge wolf,who looked sleepy, howled Londly last night in the garden 🙂
The hungary wolf,who lived in a deep dark cave,howled loudly at midnight.
The vicious wolf, who is extremlely dangerous , howled hauntingly in the moonlight.
the feirce wolf,who liked to howl,went in someone’s back garden
The over sized wolf, which was trying to eat his daily meal, howled extremly loud in the dark forest.
The scary wolf,who was behind the gloomy moon,who tryed to eat a duck and howled loudly
The wolf howled.
The angry wolf howled.
The angry wolf, who likes meat, howled.
The angry wolf, who likes meat, howled wildly.
The angry wolf, who likes meat, howled wildly, on top of a mountain.
The ferocious wolf,who was rummiging through some bins in a garden, howled viciously.
The vicious wolf,who was fighting a bear,howled scarily in the deep dark woods.
The aggressive wolf, who was trying to catch his dinner, howled hungrily beside the forest
The angry werewolf,who was eating a rabbit,howled monsterisly in the dark forest.
The huge scraggy wolf howled fiercely and loudly beside the tree, in the woods, near my house.
The fierce wolf, who was sitting under a tree in the gloomy woods, howled viciously under the moonlight xx
THE wolf, who was very fluffy,howled to the man in the woods
The wolf holwed in the gleaming moonlight!
The ferousious wolf, who was watching a cat jump over the fence,howled nosily beside the massive tree.
On the world leaderboard for the decimal tenths game I put RMF and I came 12th overall in the world!!! 😀
I already did one in class today but I forgot it 🙁 but anyway here is another one.
The evil wolf, who had his tail stuck in the painful trap set by the hunters, howled angrily because he couldn’t get his tail out.
The hungry wolf,who has four cute cubs,howled excitedly in the wildlife park
The independent wolf howled in the white moon light when it got waken.
The independent wolf howled in the white moon light when i got waken.
The grizzly wolf, who was hungry for food, howled loudly in the deep dark woods.
The snarling wolf howled.
The snarling wolf, who lived in a dark cave, howled.
The snarling wolf, who lived in a dark cave, howled noisily.
The snarling wolf, who lived in a dark cave, howled noisily under the moon.
In the back garden the grumpy wolf, who lived in the woods, howled loudly.