Yesterday, we went to see Brave, and tomorrow, we’re writing the review! In Writer’s Craft today we looked at how an effective reviewer engages the audience with WOW vocabulary.
HOMEWORK TONIGHT: Write your opening sentence of your review. This must GRASP the reader instantly. An example of what we DON’T want to see:
“Brave is a nice film that I went to watch on Monday.”
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Be inspired with some Brave music from Mrs MacLeod’s favourite Julie Fowlis:
HOMEWORK TONIGHT: Write your opening sentence of your review. This must GRASP the reader instantly. An example of what we DON’T want to see:
Brave was fab i loved it and i love touch the sky it is the best xx 🙂 🙂 🙂
I like Mr.Cook secretly likes touch the sky but he just disn’t want to tell.
That is now my favourite song touch the sky.
Brave was really good,Touch the sky is a good song.Mr Cook will explode if he hears it one more time!!!!!
I love touch the sky to Mrs MacLeod.
I really enjoyed Brave.
I loved the fireworks !!!!!!
is it just one sentence
I really enjoyed Brave!