One sunny day in Iceland a man was taking his dog for a walk. When with out warning THE TEMPERATURE DROPPED SUDDENLY AND the man gave out a weak squeal. The sky went black, lights glinted in the darkness. Lights flashed on and windows illumined with light. The man sat in a corner shivering beneath a lamppost. A torch light appeared in gloom. The shadow came into view. Then a voice spoke, “Why are you out here without a torch and warm clothes, didn’t you know this is the day it goes dark for six mouths? Now lets get you inside.”
Primary School of the Year 2022
Hi Jason,
This is a super piece of writing, thank you very much for entering it into the 100 Word Challenge. You have used some great vocabulary, which adds to the atmosphere of your writing. The shadow is also very mysterious and makes the reader want to read more of your work.
Keep up the great work.
Mrs Stones
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