It was a hot sunny day when I was at the beach playing with my friends. We made a sand castle and went out in the water the water was cold and my toes were turning up under the cold water. We went back to make the the sand castle it was getting bigger every second I went for a lye on the beach and … the temperature dropped suddenly and I shot up of the beach. My friends had poured buckets of water all over me. I dived into the warm sand under the sun then In shouted at my friends and shot of home.
Primary School of the Year 2022
Hello Robbie! This is a really good 100 word challenge and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! You have described the story so well with adjectives and powerful verbs such as ‘dived’ and ‘shot’. I am really looking forward to reading more of your work Robbie! Keep up the good writing. 🙂