The Big Breakfast

Every year the school does the the big breakfast. the big breakfast is where friends and family can come to the school and give a donation then we have a big breakfast filled with sausage rolls banana pancakes fruits berries and I could go on and on!  But the big breakfast might just seem like a thing just to feed us but actually it respects 2 of our right to food and clean water this is important because we are a rights respecting school, but the rights are not the only thing we achieved? Actually we  managed to make a huge amount of  236.45 pounds because of all the kind donations from family and friends.

My Writing Endeavour

My Endeavour is writing a book. I picked  this topic because I really like writing books and stories especially adventure stories with all sorts of mythical creatures.

So far I have done 5 pages of the book  and quiet a few other small things like drawing a pictures and some  diagrams of my characters and lots of notes about the book. characters I have made so far I have a lot more characters planned but so far I have made 3 and two of them are big monster that the main character ben has to fight them on his quest.

What am I planning to do. I am planning to get to page 10 so that means 5 pages a day  my target and the end is 20 pages and draw pictures of the scenes that are going on  in the story. Also I want to manage some more drawings of the characters and label them and make some more characters to help the main character and his quest.

How can I fix the book a little more I could maybe add more adjectives and make the sentences shorter so its more of a picture book than a book with lota and lots of words.

Neil

 

 

 

 

 

Bee Readers Citizenship Group Meeting

We are the Bee Readers group.  Today we recorded for the Islay podcast to say about what our favourite  book is and why.  Also we wrote a letter to Laphroaig and Mrs Mcgilvery to ask if it is OK to set reading rocks so when tourist or locals come over there will be a QR code for them to scan. So they can listen to our stories and our amazing podcasts!.

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