Description Writing

Dundee Clan began their writing journey by exploring description writing.

We completed our first piece of writing, describing our favourite animal.  We remembered to use the describing bubble to support us which reminds us to describe size, colour, texture, position, number, shape and what our animal does.

We explored the structure of description writing and learnt the names and purpose of the different sections in a description text.  We have come up with hand signals to represent each section which will help us remind us about the order in which to build our descriptive pieces of writing.

Finally, we explored the language features of a description text, looking closely at the nouns, adjectives and pronouns, recording them in a grid that we can refer to later when writing our own descriptions.

We will continue to explore this genre of writing further by writing description texts and exploring descriptive passages in our reading lessons.

Summer Programme: Free Sports activities at West Lothian Leisure Venues

Please see below the WLC funded summer programme activities being delivered by West Lothian Leisure as part of the West Lothian Get into Summer 2023 Programme.

The link to access a free place is – https://www.westlothianleisure.com/contact-us/summer-of-activity-enquiry/

Swimming Crash Course Lessons Bathgate Xcite 10 – 13 July 10.00 – 10.50am

10 – 13 July 11.00 – 11.50am

Whitburn Xcite 24 – 27 July 10.00 – 10.50am

24 – 27 July 11.00 – 11.50am

Winchburgh Academy 31 July – 3 August 10.00 – 10.50am

31 July – 3 August 11.00 – 11.50am

Multi- Sports Camps Bathgate Xcite 3 – 6 July 9.30am – 3.00pm

17 – 20 July 9.30am – 3.00pm

7 – 10 August 9.30am – 3.00pm

Broxburn Xcite 17 – 20 July 9.30am – 3.00pm

31 July – 3 August 9.30am – 3.00pm

East Calder Xcite 3 – 6 July 9.30am – 3.00pm

17 – 20 July 9.30am – 3.00pm

7 – 10 August 9.30am – 3.00pm

Linlithgow Xcite 24 – 27 July 9.30am – 3.00pm

7 – 10 August 9.30am – 3.00pm

Winchburgh Xcite Sport & Wellbeing Hub 10 – 13 July 9.30am – 3.00pm

24 – 27 July 9.30am – 3.00pm

31 July – 3 August 9.30am – 3.00pm

Xcite Outdoors Summer Activity Programme

This summer Xcite Outdoors have an exciting programme of outdoor activities based out of Xcite Linlithgow.  There are opportunities for young people and their families to take part in a range of outdoor activities such as:-

  • Canoeing
  • Kayaking
  • Mountain Biking
  • Archery

Activities are for children aged 8 years and over.

Xcite Outdoors – Summer Holiday Programme – Timetable – PDF for Schools – 2023

Take a look at the PDF link above for more information and how to sign up.

The Ben’s IDL Showcase

Last week, the Ben’s took over the Discovery Den area.

They has been working on their IDL topic ‘Ancient Civilisations’ and had so much amazing work, they wanted to show it off and plan a school event. Here is what they had to say:

In 4 main groups, we chose our Civilisation of interest: Ancient Romans, Ancient Egyptians, the Aztecs and the Vikings.

We organised ourselves into sub-topics and worked for 5 weeks researching, learning, discussing, planning and creating beautiful, amazing pieces of work that demonstrated what we learned from our research.

We set wrote poems and stories, collected data, made PPT’s, cooked food, conducted science experiments, created art pieces, performed drama pieces and made videos.

We used our teamwork skills to work together to build a picture of what we discovered.

They invited members of staff and other clans around and presented beautifully and confidently, the learning and knowledge they had on their chosen topic. Well done Bens!

Calderwood Book Hunt

Due to the fantastic reward of £961.22 from our Book Fair in September, Calderwood Primary has been busy shopping for new books! Our Calderwood pupils have been searching for texts they would like to see in their clan libraries and as part of their guided reading groups. We are very excited that we have the opportunity to add to our selection of books at Calderwood!

We would love for our families to get involved in this too! For Primary 1-3, we are expanding our clan libraries and for P4-P7 we are building our reading group texts. Please use the website links below and type a comment with which texts you would like to see your pupil engaging with at school.

Clan Libraries: https://shop.scholastic.co.uk/childrens-books

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Assembly and Narrative Writing in Bramble

Bramble clan have been very busy, preparing for our first Bramble clan assembly at Calderwood.  We have all worked together, as a fantastic team, to create our assembly.  We all took on different jobs and roles to prepare for this and then brought it all together, to showcase our learning about the Brain, and practised really hard.  We had invites to make, props to make, costumes to organise, the script to write, words to practise, displays to make and songs to learn and sing, with actions.  We have loved using the stage in the arena and have really enjoyed acting and performing.  We have had a fantastic time working on our assembly together and have enjoyed sharing our learning with you all.

We have been exploring traditional tales, fables, myths and legends in our IDL lessons and have learnt what these are and what the main features are.  In writing, we delved deeper and looked at the traditional tale of The Little Mermaid.  We found that the original story of The Little Mermaid is very different from the one we already know.  Together, as a clan, we retold the story using our own words, making sure we used the correct structure – orientation, complication and resolution.  Our challenge, was to use this story as a basis for our own.  We could use the story and change the characters or setting to make it different from the original.  Instead of the Little Mermaid, some of us changed the character to an Arctic Fox, a curious turtle or a dragon.  We kept some parts of the story the same and changed others.  We created 24 different stories from the one tale!

We worked hard on our stories, focussing on a different section each week.  We wrote each section and then re-read it, and edited parts of it.  We enjoyed editing our stories- scoring out parts or adding in parts, showing- and feeling what it is like to be an author.

 

In IDL lessons, we learnt more about the book-making process and researched the different roles involved in this process.  We found out that there are many different roles involved in the process such as the author, illustrator, designer, editor and publisher.  After researching this we moved on to making our own books.  We took the story we had been creating in our writing lessons and designed what we would like our book of this to be like and what materials we would like to use to make it.

We have been busy creating our own books to include our own creative story that we have been writing.  It was very exciting to transform our work from a piece of writing in our jotter to our own book that we can read to others.  We are super proud of our work.#

 

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