Burravoe Primary School

November 1, 2012
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My Amazing October Holidays

I flew to Aberdeen on the 19th of October and I met loads of people I knew like Gwen, Fred, Matthew, Craig and Keiran. I saw Jenifer and Laurence at the airport and I also arranged to meet up with my cousins torin and Finlay in a restraint and the where a scary man with knifes and said to my cousin torin “you better watch out” and Finlay was frightened, Earlier  that day I went Ice skating on real ice . I met Torin and Finlay and their  mum and  dad again  and I met my big cousin Sarah in Aberdeen  I went to the cinema twice and saw Madagascar 3 and  Hotel Transylvania and on the boat on the way home because it was  foggy  and we saw  Ice age 4 continental Drift. I got a  mini buildabear while  I was away and I called  it swirl when we got home it was 8 in the morning so we got our pjs on and  went to bed then we went to the play park with phoebe , Laura, Rosie , Abby and Lucy . I went to swimming with Phoebe, Lucy, Laura, Rosie, Julia and Martin and I passed my deep end test.

November 1, 2012
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My October Holidays

The Holidays

I played on the Wii the game is called New Super Mario Bros. Wii. I played the game with dad.

Leah, Neil, Mum, Dad and Me went to Lerwick. I got a power ranger samurai comic book in the Co-op.  We have dinner in the car we have baked tattie. Leah, Neil and I have ham and cheese. Dad has cheese. Mum had cheese and pineapple. Then we went Tesco we bought vegetables. Then we went home.

Leah and I played with my toys. I played with Norman the puffin and Leah played with Mr Crabs.

October 31, 2012
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My Holidays

I went to Lerwick to shop. We went to Tescos and we bought food. Melissa and me saw some tvs that you can buy. We had a bake tottie in the car. I played my 3ds I played on Mario Kart 7 and I won. I had a battle game with Melissa.

October 31, 2012
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Going to Blair Atholl

Going to Blair Atholl.

To get to Blair Atholl we had to go on the North Link boat. When we were in Aberdeen we had to go into Perth and Pitlochry up a BIG hill. (In Pitlochry I got ice cream called blue goo.) Our Holiday cottages were up a hill . Mum saw a sign it said Tom Of Lude Holiday Cottages. Our cottage was called The Clipping Shed. It had a cute little kitchen, a sitting room and table in the same room, a little bathroom, mum and dads bedroom and me and Emer’s cute little beds. We stayed there for a week. Then we went back on the boat to get home.

October 31, 2012
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My Sleepover

My Sleepover

Phoebe came for a sleepover at my house. She came in the car.

We played bowling and we played Nintendogs and we watched toy story.

Aftr we watched toy story we had some toast. Phoebe had jam on hers.

I had some butter on mine.

And aftr we had are toast we went to sleep

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October 22, 2012
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Zana’s Adventure

Once upon a time in a sandy desert there were two baby warriors born. One was a girl and one was a boy. They were both warriors ready to fight because they got the mark of bravery when they were born (it is like being christened.)There names were Manaj and Zana. They usually go out hunting with their dad at about 8 o’clock everyday to go hunting.  One day Zana got kidnapped, Manaj went looking for her. He found her in a cage underwater so he took a deep breath and dived in, he unlocked the cage and graphed her, and then he swam with to dry land with her. He carried her home and put a towel around her. When she woke she asked “What happened” and Manaj said

“You got kidnapped and put in a cage under water and I saved you.”

They had a party to celebrate Zana’s return.  Manaj asked Zana “would you like to dance” she agreed.

Zana’s Adventure

October 22, 2012
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The Miracle

Once upon a time there was a boy and a girl the boy was called Jack and the girl was called Mia. One day they went to go and buy a cat but there was none there. When they turned around there was there was the shop keeper and they asked if he had any cats and he said yes they were behind the counter.

Then we went behind the counter it was a miracle the room was full of cats the girl loved it.

The Miracle

October 22, 2012
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Zak in the Desert

Once upon a time in the hot desert morning a there was boy called Zak. Zak has a leopard skin and a spear. One day I will fight the tiger like my brothers said Zak. Zak was scared of the tiger because the tiger is very long. Zak said I am scared of the tiger. At the middle of the night Zak was dreaming of fighting the tiger then roar sound I was running to get his leopard skin and my spear. I said where’s that tiger I said. But I can’t see in the dark said Zak.  Zak was walked in the middle of the night. He walks forward then he saw a tiger. Zak was running fast. Zak said there’s a tiger coming. Ok said the brothers. The brothers got there leopard skin and dare spear. Then the brothers and Zak the tiger went closer. The brothers heart their legs because the tiger bit them Zak was brave he ran to the tiger. The tiger was so scared of the leopard skin then tiger ran away. Zak was happy because he was not scared of the tiger ever again.

Zak in the desert

October 22, 2012
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Rain More Rain

Hi my name is Lily and I am a little girl. Say hi to my friend Abby the koala. She is sooooooo cute. One day we were asleep in a tree. It was snowing and raining at the same time. I am so hungry said Abby. In my backpack I have skittles, mentos, water, cheese and ham sandwiches and randoms. Yum yum yum! Can I have some skittles please? Said koala. Do not eat them all said Lily. Okok I will not says koala. I am wet. So am I Lily. I will wish for the rain to go off said Lily. Ah the rain is going off now. Thanks Lily you have helped save my lands from drowning. Thank you.

rain more rain

October 22, 2012
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The Magical Sari

There is a really hot country and it has lots of people there. There is a princess called Suki, she is an important princess. She has a magical sari. She wears it everywhere! It gives amagic to anyone she likes. She wears a special nightgown that’s like a sari. She has a cat, she is called Suri.  She looks like a little leopard really, with spots and ginger and dark colours, she is rather big. They both are strolling to the town. “Look over there Suki it looks like a prince, he looks a little lost” said Suri. “I think you’re right” said Suki.  They are just walking over to him and they are saying “are you ok” and the prince is relieved that someone comes because he is really lost. They are all at Suki’s palace now and everyone is welcoming the prince. He is living in the palace. The princess and the prince are the richest people in the world.

Sari

October 22, 2012
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The Lucky Fish

Once upon a time there was a girl called Jessey and she had a lucky fish. She lived in a red and gold house. She had black hair and she wore a red jumper. Her lucky fish was silver. The lucky fish gave her powers. One day when she was washing her clothes a boy broke in.

The boy came ate the fish. Jessey was upset.  A silver glow came and the fish was alive. Then the fish and Jessey went fishing.

The Lucky Fish

October 22, 2012
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Anya

Hi my name is Anya,

I have 3 sisters, an evil step dad and a cool mum.

I live in Shanghai in a huge house with secret gardens and a big lake. I was going down to dinner to eat noodles and egg fried rice. My mum and step dad were sitting at the table. I sat down on the red and gold soft chairs, mum started calling the others down for dinner. My first sister called Yan came running down the grand old stairs towards the dinner table and slid in the seat beside me. Next came Anne and Grace and slid into seats by my evil step dad. We ate the noodles and rice which was made by Ken Home.

After dinner I ran outside and did several cartwheels and then handstands until I ended up near the sliver gates. Then I sat down near the lake, just then I heard something puffing behind me, I turned to see a beautiful rainbow fish which shone in the sunlight. I wasn’t quite sure what to do with it! Just then an idea suddenly popped into my head. “Bingo!” I said with excitement. Then without a second thought I threw the fish into the lake.


Everyday I visited the fish and I even called it Sparkle. But I couldn’t go to school without Sparkle! I know he was a fish but he was like a best friend to me! “Morning Mum” I called as I came down stairs, Mum was in a happy mood and my step dad was in a wired mood. I had my breakfast and then I went outside to play, “It is great to have a weekend off school” I said to Sparkle.

One day me and Yan went into the secret garden where the swimming pool was. We dived in to the swimming pool and swam a full length of the pool. “I like having days out with you sis!” I said to Yan, “Me too, we never get any days off with our evil step dad!” Yan sighed. “I have to agree!” I sighed to Yan. When we did about 19 lengths we were out of breath.

After dinner I went to bed and fell fast asleep, about 12:00 in the night, my horrible step dad crept outside with a knife and called “Ohh Sparkle please come out to play” He said in a creepy voice. Sparkle usually pops up his head on the side of the lake edge when he hears my voice. My evil step dad whipped out his sharp knife and killed Sparkle.

The next day I went out to see Sparkle but when I called out to Sparkle she didn’t pop up. I sat down on the grass looking miserable until I saw a bright rainbow light coming from the bins. I went to see what it was then I saw fish bones lying in the bin covered with banana skins and potato skins. “Oh no it can’t be Sparkle it just can’t!” I said. Just then bones came floating up from the bins and formed a fish shape, I felt scared of the floating fish until it spoke! “Anya don’t be afraid of me, I am Sparkle your fish but your evil stepdad killed me but the only reason I am here is that you saved me so I will give you a wishing power so you can wish of anything you want! said Sparkle. “Okay!” I said. “Now all you have to say is ‘Wishing well make my wishes come true!’” said Sparkle. I left Sparkle and went to my room, I said “Wishing well make my wishes come true!”

“What do you want master?” came a voice. “I want my step dad to disappear!” Then the next morning I went downstairs and saw that my stepdad had gone! “Your evil stepdad has gone and now we can do what we want to do!” said Mum in a delighted voice.

October 22, 2012
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Timmy And Jack

Once upon a time there were 2 boys. 1 was called Jack he had a spear. The other boys name was Timmy he had a backpack. In Timmy’s backpack he had Mentos, water and binoculars. Timmy went outside it was sunny and Jack was over the wall. Timmy climbed over the wall. He went over the wall there was a spider. Timmy was very scared so he fell off the wall. Jack said are you okay? I think I am ok. Are you sure? Look at your leg it is bleeding. Oh yeah it is I will go home and get a plaster. Timmy came back. Timmy said it was all better Jack was very happy that he was better and Jack and Timmy lived happily ever after.

Timmy and Jack

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