Burravoe Primary School

Zak in the Desert

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Once upon a time in the hot desert morning a there was boy called Zak. Zak has a leopard skin and a spear. One day I will fight the tiger like my brothers said Zak. Zak was scared of the tiger because the tiger is very long. Zak said I am scared of the tiger. At the middle of the night Zak was dreaming of fighting the tiger then roar sound I was running to get his leopard skin and my spear. I said where’s that tiger I said. But I can’t see in the dark said Zak.  Zak was walked in the middle of the night. He walks forward then he saw a tiger. Zak was running fast. Zak said there’s a tiger coming. Ok said the brothers. The brothers got there leopard skin and dare spear. Then the brothers and Zak the tiger went closer. The brothers heart their legs because the tiger bit them Zak was brave he ran to the tiger. The tiger was so scared of the leopard skin then tiger ran away. Zak was happy because he was not scared of the tiger ever again.

Zak in the desert


2 Comments

  1. A very nice story that is really funny and cool. Sadly, I see some mistakes like when Zak is talking he should have ” ” around what he said.

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