Burravoe Primary School

October 1, 2012
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Leah’s 100wc

One day there was a tiny piano. It was old.  A black haired boy came in the room and looked at the piano he played it. Then an old man came in the room. He nearly grabbed him. Then he ran home and told his dad so he and his dad went back and the old man was kind to his dad then the little boy went past and he was angry. Then the boy and his dad were sitting on the chairs. Then it was nearly mid night so the boy and his dad went home and his dad took the little boy to bed.

October 1, 2012
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Charlotte’s 100 Word Challenge

Hi my name is Carly, I have a tiny sister called Amy; we both have piano lessons I am a professional and my tiny sister makes lots of fantastic and exploding tunes. I am on the way to school today and I am staring at the pavement just then I saw the old school by the new school. I went through the green rusty gate which let out a horrible sound. I hurried into school and into the science room where my first class would start. My classmates and I did an experiment and it didn’t work and exploded, everyone said sorry to the headteacher.

October 1, 2012
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Kerry’s 100 Word Challenge

Once upon a time there lived a  green jelly bean that could play piano and Lilly         (that’s me)  I’m sorry  I fell asleep I knew that jelly bean was my brother just kidding. It all happened when I was messing about with dad’s  potions with  a packet of  jelly  beans and I accidently dropped a green jelly bean in a potion and it jumped  out of it and started playing a tiny piano  what was kind of weird I know. Then I heard a bang and one of dad potions had spilt and made the house explode “woops” I whispered I think maybe it’s finished.

October 1, 2012
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Honor’s five SC

 The wind is blowing woo woo the wind is cold.

 The storm is coming closer to me it made me jump. The rain is splashing on me I am wet and cold brrrrr! That is bad weather for everyone

mostly me. At my house on a stormy night I am in my bed sleeping quiet.

October 1, 2012
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Abby’s 5sc

Wind is bad weather. 

Wind and snow makes a blizzard.

Thunder and lightning is not good.

Hail is icy rain.

High winds and rain it would make damage.

October 1, 2012
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Mia’s 100 Word Challenge

There was a tiny green zebra. He was very talented because he could play the piano and he could talk. He was learning loads of new words every day. His favourite words were sorry and exploded. He used them a lot. He normally used both the words at the same time. He was good with words. He was very good at most musical instruments except the triangle because it’s hard. His favourite instrument was the piano. He played it loads. But one day he played it a bit too much he broke all his fingers. Then he moved to Tinytown and was never seen again.

September 25, 2012
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Leah’s 100 word challenge

Looking behind me I saw a scary big hedgehog and it was black and hedgehog at the garden and he was eating grass and he was called Blackie and he loves eating grass and rushed outside he was gone and when I rushed back to my bed room and I got him outside and I looked all the doors and windows and he was gone. The next morning they where another one and he was a baby one and he was in the garden and he was running about and he was tiny and he rushed to his house and he was in his house.

September 25, 2012
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Melissa’s 100 WC

We were just stitting down to dinner when a boy came to our house.  I showed him to my room the boy was happy because I was a member of the sports club. The boy and I was practising running. Mum asked are you practising your running for tomorrow. Yes! mum. Where’s my pair of shoes i asked. I thought you put them in your room said mum.  I thought you would know where i put my shoes. You should tidy your room. Ok i said. Hey! Boy do you what to tidy my room OK said my boy friend. So we tidied up my bedroom. I’m happy.

September 25, 2012
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Mia’s 100 Word Challenge

I went out to dinner with my friends, Jack, Sarah and Tom.  We went to T.G.I Fridays we were just sitting down to dinner when there was a huge explosion.  I was unconscious for a while, and when I woke up Tom, Sarah and Jack were sitting beside me, they were frightened.  It turned out the explosion was a bomb.  The firemen and ambulance crew came in.  The firemen put out the fire and we were all taken outside, it was then that we realised that the Queen had been eating their too and she was the target.  Luckily there was only minor injuries and everyone was OK.

September 25, 2012
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Kerry’s 100 Word Challenge

 

We were just sitting down to dinner when Selena walked in the door and she shouted “Mum, Dad, Sis! I have some excellent news I can live with you again.”
“Dad go get the spare bed out of the shed! Mum get a pillow and matching blanket!”  cried out Lilly, so they did. They ate their tea. “Bed time!” Mum called so Lilly and Selena went to bed. In the morning when mum went to wake the girls up they were already up and had made pancakes for breakfast how lovely Mum exclaimed so they sat down for breakfast dad sneezed “guzinti” laughed Lilly, Selena and Mum.

September 25, 2012
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Charlotte’s 100 Word Challenge

 We were just sitting down to dinner when a bomb hit the road, we ran down to the cellar and hid under an old wooden table. “Well that’s one way of having a good dinner, who is bombing us now?” asked mum in a fed up voice. I can’t believe someone would like to bomb us, we haven’t done anything wrong. “Well to tell you the truth we know quite a lot of other people in the whole world that hate us!” I whispered with a shaking voice. Don’t worry they will stop soon I hope” Mum told me. But the bombing didn’t stop! I heard a bang!

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September 24, 2012
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Safe Shetland

Here in Shetland it is very quiet. It is safe, there are not very much traffic, there are not very much crime. You can trust nearly everyone.  Everyone it really friendly. When you are walking past people then they say hi to you. We don’t have very many police stations. Here the people are very kind, helpful and if someone is lost they would help them.

September 24, 2012
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What’s different about Shetland?

See I just moved here so I don’t know a lot about Shetland but I can tell you what is different. OK I will. Now it very quiet in Shetland and also it is very friendly up here. I have not met any one who is mean up here. Do you have anay one who is mean in people your country?  I think it is safe here because when I was in England I was scared if somebody was going to rob me but I don’t think that now.

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