Today, P6 have been using ambitious Vocabulary, Connectives, Openers and Punctuation (VCOP) to up-level boring sentences. Here are some examples:
Miai and Jed: As the sun woke up, the blue-eyed, little boy slowly shouted however nobody heard him.
Jessica and Ula: Suddenly, my far uncle Steve sneezed very loudly like a tornado with snot spiraling round!
Freya and Logan: The long nosed, evil witch chuckled and said, “Go wash the oven.”
Ewen and Jasmin: The lazy, skinny boy screamed, “Bravo!” although the team lost.
Ella and Edward: The old, tall boy shouted at his mum, “Can I have a sweet?” even though they had none left.
Mya and Katy: As it became dark, silently the baby bat ate lots of berries before dinner.
Hallie and Jay: Eventually the fluffy, white puppies were yelping for their mum, “Yelp, yelp, yelp!!”
Aiden: Out of the blue an evil witch laughed like a dying horse.
Katie and Iona: The small, skinny, slimy snake slithered slowly along.
Georgie and Matthew: The bright sun shone its light as the curtains magically opened.
Oskar and Lauren: Nastily the teacher screamed at the children.
Daniel and Katie: For no reason, the scary, green witch laughed with terror.
Euan and Lewis: Dreadfully, an enormous boy shouted at his mother because he couldn’t get it his way.
