At writing time this week, we had to try to improve our writing by adding wow words.

Geordie  – It was cool and awesome to write wow words.  It makes my writing much better.  One of my wow words was ‘screeched’.

Josh – I gave myself a thumbs up.  I used the word ‘hurried’ instead of ‘ran’.

Liam- I liked my writing this week. The pictures make it fun and also help me.

Liam wrote ‘The car skidded on the ice’.

Callum- I wrote about a story. It was very long. There was a boy, a girl, a robber and lots of others. It’s a work in progress story from the never ending story game.

We would like to challenge you to improve these words:

Went

Said

Walk