The aeroplane was glued to the floor and it just wouldn’t take off. It was stuck by concrete that spilled out of a truck that went to the wrong place. They had to get the strongest hammer ever to break the concrete and let the aeroplane take off to the place they wanted to go. They want to go to Paris to see the Eiffel Tower and art galleries. It took half an hour to break the concrete. The aeroplane eventually took off and they got to have fun time looking in the art galleries and up the Eiffel tower.
It just wouldn’t take off
February 5, 2021 | 1 Comment
February 9, 2021 at 10:22 am
This is a very good piece of writing Hope, I really enjoyed reading it!
Your vocabulary and imagery is excellent, as is your spelling and punctuation.
I’m relieved that your characters were able to enjoy their holiday after all and reading this even made me miss travelling!
Keep up the good work!
Anna (Team 100WC)