Burravoe Primary School

Under the Water


One day they was a dog called Bob that was in the woods he smelt perfume of beautiful flowers. He walked until SNAP! It was a dry twig. Bob was scared. He walked a bit more. He saw the sea he went in a boat. Then an octopus came along and crashed the boat. Then a mermaid came along in the distances “Jump on my back” said the mermaid. So Bob jumped on her back. The mermaid took him underwater.  “I am going to take you underwater” said the mermaid. It had treasure and diamonds. It had lots of mermaids. Bob did not like swimming but he wanted some of the diamonds and treasure. He saw an underwater cafe that had air. But the mermaid wanted to show him something else under the water. He found an old boat that was rough and it sunk. “Who lives in this boat?” said Bob “I live in here” said the mermaid. “Come inside” said the mermaid. The dog saw a statue it was a carving of the mermaid’s dad. The mermaid touched him he came alive. “Hi” said the mermaid. This is Bob said the mermaid. “Hi” said Bob. So the mermaid and Bob went too. He saw the octopus in the café eating a cheesy burger. Bob told the mermaid that they would both be friends. “Bye” said the dog so he went to run back to the forest the mermaid watched him go. So he went through the forest.

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