Coconut is a lamb that lived in a grassy field. She had diamond shaped eyes and nose. She loved grass and never stopped eating it. One day she decided to go exploring. She went to the back of the field. When she wanted to go home she could not see her mother. Coconut was worried and lonely. The farmer noticed she was gone. Then he found her. One week later she found a river she went over to it and suddenly fell in it. Coconut couldn’t get out but the farmer got her out. So she was always safe with her Mother forever.
That was a story I wrote in primary 3. It was one of the first stories I wrote when I moved to the school.
Published by Charlie Marshall P5
I like your story Charlie. Could you put up a new story so that we can see how you have moved your writing skills forward? I look forward to reading it soon