Hi
It’s Rhys today I have made a PowerPoint on global warming. I think that global warming is a serious issue that needs to be taken seriously and do something about. I have emailed my PowerPoint to the school.
Link to the Power Point: green planet
Hi Rhys, I am really looking forward to seeing your PowerPoint. I agree with you that it is an important issue.
Hi Rhys – I like your PP – but I spotted 2 places where you need to add apostrophes (this week’s literacy) and one spelling mistake.
Can you find them?
Good quality information – you have chosen images which help the reader to understand the information. Well selected.
Hello again, Rhys. I’ve seen your PowerPoint now. You have explained the problem very clearly and in good detail. The images you have chosen either match the topic, or are motivating. Well done.