Hey everybody. Today I did some Five a day and fractions. Then I done some cursive handwriting. Then I re wrote my letter again. By Esmaé
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Great work Esmae!
Wow, Esmae! Your cursive writing is super!
I like how in your letter you have shown consideration towards the person you are writing to, by asking them their favourite drinks etc. that would make them feel welcome. You have explained why they would be a good person to come to that particular event. (A wee tip, you don’t need to write the word ‘date’ in front of the date!)
Lots of effort in this work – thanks Esmae.
Thanks for working on your letter again Esmae! Great content – this letter reads like a discussion – good work. You have used questions and description about yourself and the school to add detail to your letter. A very good piece of work – well done!
Wow Esmae, excellent redraft of your letter – you really took on points and uplevelled your work well done.
You’ve made a good start with your fractions work, but can you go back and look at it again next week? So far, you have shapes which represent the fraction that I’ve written. Now can you find some equivalent fractions – the shape might be cut into a different number of pieces, but we still end up with the same amount. For example, the first shape you have drawn is a rectangle split into thirds, and you have coloured 1/3. What if the shape was divided into 6 equal pieces? How many would need to be coloured for it to be equal to the third? Go back and look at the Bitesize page again if you need more help.