September 24, 2012
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Playground in snow
The weather in Burravoe is mostly windy sometimes rainy. It is normal it will be sunny with a warm wind . It normaly gets to about 19°c and 17°c in the summer and in the winter it normaly gets to about 2°c.
Burravoe Marina in sunshine
Our ferry in the sunset
September 24, 2012
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Thar are lots of frendly people in Shetland. They are Shetland dielet. We live on a little called Yell. It is a friendly place and there are lots of events like of coffie mornings, the carnivil , the haloween party, cristmas party, Yell show.
September 24, 2012
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September 17, 2012
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Beautiful water fountains in the park. A lady pushing a baby in a pram. Sitting on a bench in the amazing park. Washing your dog. A boy sailing his boat in a calm lake. Looking at the beautiful nature in the playful park.
September 17, 2012
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Looking behind me I saw a scary big hedgehog and it was black and hedgehog at the garden and he was eating grass and he was called blacky and he loves eating grass and rushed outside he was gone and when I rushed back to my bed room and I got him outside and I looked all the doors and windows and he was gone. The next morning they where another one and he was a baby one and he was in the garden and he was running about and he was tiny and he rushed to his house and he was in his house.
September 17, 2012
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Looking behind me I saw a long shadow then I woke up in the middle of the night I looked at my window there was a giant person. But the giant was gone then I go down stairs then I saw a shadow in the door glass. Then the shadow was coming closer in the dark cold night. I opened the door he was gone again. I looked around outside and was no giant then I hear loud noise in upstairs. then I opened my door a bit then is was a giant shadow the I walked forward in my bed room I opened my bed sheet then I saw a giant.
September 14, 2012
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There is a water fountain has a boy playing with his toy. And they are a Craig. And a band stand. And a bridge. There is a boy spraying water ate a dog.
September 14, 2012
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I went in to a dark forest I heard loud footsteps looking behind me I saw a Small and cute monster it was hairy not what I expected . Then it yelled “Owwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!” I stopped and it had. A thorn in it foot it said its name was Buggle. It was bleeding. Luckily I had a plaster in my pocket I put it on his foot he whispered thank you. He went home then he said wait here he came back with camera he took a photo of us both and I took it home and put it in a picture frame I miss him.
September 14, 2012
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It has a fountain. A little girl is pushing a pram. A little boy is sailing his boat. The blossoms are on the trees. A dog is getting sprayed by a man.
September 14, 2012
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It was summer in the olden days. It has a water fountain to drink water. There are blossoms growing on the trees. A boy is sailing a boat while a girl is pushing a pram. A family is having a picnic.
September 14, 2012
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Looking behind me, I saw a road going up to an old cottage where I lived, But I didn’t see a robber coming towards my house with an empty bag. I ran inside my house because it looked like it was going to rain, that’s when I came face to face with the robber. I ran towards my room and bolted my door and locked the windows fast, I hid under my bed where I could watched the robber emptying all the draws and leaving the place in a pig stie. He finally got what he wanted which was a buttered sandwich and ran away.
September 13, 2012
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This week the younger ones have been reading and writing about another traditional tale; this time it is The Pancake. As part of their learning they made pancakes for everyone to try and for them to take home!
In Scotland the sort of pancakes they made are called Scotch pancakes; in England some people call them drop scones. I wonder if they are like the Welsh cakes Class 5 at Caegarw School asked us if we made?
September 12, 2012
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Pandi the Brave
Written by Nathene Arnaoutis
Illustrated by Sarah Adams
Pupils in P2-6 listened to the story of Pandi the Brave. In groups of 3, they wrote a description of the beginning, middle and end of the story. All groups then peer assessed each other’s work. They then added their group opinions of the story at the end.
Pandi the Brave
Pandi was very helpful except he was scared of the dark, but he could speek to the monkeys in the trees. His dad was the chief of the tribe. His 3 brothers Jobee, Shaka and Cetswayo were inthe tribe too. All Pandi wanted was to be in the tribe with his leopard skin and spear. Every day he went to the cows in the field. One of the cows was smaller than all the rest and that one was Pandi’s favourite.
By Mia, Phoebe and Abby
Well done on your work. HS MA KB
I would like to have seen a little information at the beginning on where the story is set. Miss A.
Pandi goes to bed, he can’t get to sleep because there is a horrible cold storm, in the distance he could hear a faint sound coming from the outside, He could here Tugela and she was crying for help, Pandi tried to block out the sound but he couldn’t the more he heard it he knew he would have to go out.
He ran looking for Tugela, he could hear faint cackling sound in the distance. But the cackling noise was coming from the wolfs, he ran on he found Tugela,
Tugela was trapped under a rock. Pandi ran to get his father and brothers. They carried Tugela home.
We had to change the font to read it. We all like the rest of it though. PS if you want to change the font back then you can. By Mia, Phoebe and Abby
You describe the middle of the story in detail.
I think there are a number of commas in the first paragraph which should have been full stops. Miss A.
When he wakes up in the morning his mum and dad are at his bed side they prestened him with a leopard skin and spear. Then his brothers gave him gifts Jobee gave him a mouse ,Shaka gave him a catapult and Cetswayo gave him a whistle . He was happy he put on his leopard skin and grabbed his spear and ran out side and danced in the sun .
Check your spelling mistakes, good ending but you might want to add missing words to the presents. CP, BC and LA
I agree with CP, BC and LA that it is important to check your spelling. I think this is a detailed description of the end of the story. Miss A.
Group opinions of story
‘Excellent story and pictures. Very beautiful’
Honor (7), Kerry (7) and Melissa (9)
‘Cool story, awesome pictures, catches people’s attention’
Charlotte (10), Bradley (7) and Leah (9)
‘We love the story, beautiful illustrations’.
Mia (9), Abby (6) and Phoebe (7)
September 4, 2012
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September 3, 2012
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I went to a cool Yell Show it was amazing because I got candyfloss and a slush puppy they were yummy. I saw a bouncy castle. The wether was wet and misty. My dad was looking at my big sister with the horses. Me and my mum went
to the cows they were very smelly. When we all joind up we all went to big hall.
