September 13, 2012
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This week the younger ones have been reading and writing about another traditional tale; this time it is The Pancake. As part of their learning they made pancakes for everyone to try and for them to take home!
In Scotland the sort of pancakes they made are called Scotch pancakes; in England some people call them drop scones. I wonder if they are like the Welsh cakes Class 5 at Caegarw School asked us if we made?
September 12, 2012
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Pandi the Brave
Written by Nathene Arnaoutis
Illustrated by Sarah Adams
Pupils in P2-6 listened to the story of Pandi the Brave. In groups of 3, they wrote a description of the beginning, middle and end of the story. All groups then peer assessed each other’s work. They then added their group opinions of the story at the end.
Pandi the Brave
Pandi was very helpful except he was scared of the dark, but he could speek to the monkeys in the trees. His dad was the chief of the tribe. His 3 brothers Jobee, Shaka and Cetswayo were inthe tribe too. All Pandi wanted was to be in the tribe with his leopard skin and spear. Every day he went to the cows in the field. One of the cows was smaller than all the rest and that one was Pandi’s favourite.
By Mia, Phoebe and Abby
Well done on your work. HS MA KB
I would like to have seen a little information at the beginning on where the story is set. Miss A.
Pandi goes to bed, he can’t get to sleep because there is a horrible cold storm, in the distance he could hear a faint sound coming from the outside, He could here Tugela and she was crying for help, Pandi tried to block out the sound but he couldn’t the more he heard it he knew he would have to go out.
He ran looking for Tugela, he could hear faint cackling sound in the distance. But the cackling noise was coming from the wolfs, he ran on he found Tugela,
Tugela was trapped under a rock. Pandi ran to get his father and brothers. They carried Tugela home.
We had to change the font to read it. We all like the rest of it though. PS if you want to change the font back then you can. By Mia, Phoebe and Abby
You describe the middle of the story in detail.
I think there are a number of commas in the first paragraph which should have been full stops. Miss A.
When he wakes up in the morning his mum and dad are at his bed side they prestened him with a leopard skin and spear. Then his brothers gave him gifts Jobee gave him a mouse ,Shaka gave him a catapult and Cetswayo gave him a whistle . He was happy he put on his leopard skin and grabbed his spear and ran out side and danced in the sun .
Check your spelling mistakes, good ending but you might want to add missing words to the presents. CP, BC and LA
I agree with CP, BC and LA that it is important to check your spelling. I think this is a detailed description of the end of the story. Miss A.
Group opinions of story
‘Excellent story and pictures. Very beautiful’
Honor (7), Kerry (7) and Melissa (9)
‘Cool story, awesome pictures, catches people’s attention’
Charlotte (10), Bradley (7) and Leah (9)
‘We love the story, beautiful illustrations’.
Mia (9), Abby (6) and Phoebe (7)
September 4, 2012
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September 3, 2012
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I went to a cool Yell Show it was amazing because I got candyfloss and a slush puppy they were yummy. I saw a bouncy castle. The wether was wet and misty. My dad was looking at my big sister with the horses. Me and my mum went
to the cows they were very smelly. When we all joind up we all went to big hall.
September 3, 2012
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I went to the Yell Show with my family they were 3 halls the first hall had cake and modelse. I enterd a moddel and I wuined seconed. the seconed hall had a parakeet and 
vegetables.The thured hall it has lotse of game like darts and lucky dipe and a hole lote of uther stuf.
September 3, 2012
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At the Yell Show you enter things you like.Like your school work,knitting,vegetables,drawings,paitings,modles and flowers.In a game shed there were luky dip.(That is someing were you close your eyes and move your hand.)I got a blow up crocodile.Out side there were animals like horses, Shetland ponys ,sheep and cows. I got my face painted as a tiger.
September 3, 2012
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I went to the Yell Show I went with Anne , Abby and Grandad . I got a Mr. Whippy it was yummy. I got a first prize for a doll I knitted it was hard but I enjoyed making it I am getting a trophy for it because it was best children’s reserved and 1st prize for it . At the Yell Show you can enter knitting , baking , craft , sewing , painting drawing , flower and animals like farm animals or pets . You can buy things like toys and jewellery much more 
September 3, 2012
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On Friday we dug up the tatties for the Yell Show. We dug up the British Queen and we dug the black tatties. We rubbed the soil off the tattie and we put the British Queen on the table to make a pile. Then we put labels for which are which. We put the vegetables in a plastic bag and we put the vegetables in boxes and we put the tatties in one box and we put the leeks, carrots and the beetroot in the second box.
September 3, 2012
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The Yell Show is where we put things like art, pets and gardening things. We entered our vegetables in to the Yell Show, We have potatoes, carrots, beetroot, peas and leeks. We dug up the tatties in pairs, Leah dug up the tatties with Me, We dug up Forty fold tatties they were a light purple colour when they came out of the tattie bag. I also pulled up leeks . The leeks where tough to pull out of the gardening bed. Next we went inside and we measured them and then wrote them down on a sheet of paper, Then we tried to match up what looked like the best four tatties they had to be the same size. Next we wrote labels saying the name of the school and what category the tatties were in. Then we got our photos taken with the vegetables in front of us. Next we bagged the vegetables in plastic bags being careful that they wouldn’t fall of the plate that we put them on, Then we gave Miss Breyley the plants to take in her car to the Yell Show which is in East Yell.
What sort of show do you have near you?
September 3, 2012
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I went to the Yell Show my school entered some vegetables to the show and I entered a lot of things.I wun a toy dog and a toy donkey.it was very wet Igot my face painted.I saw lots of animals.I got some ice cream.
September 3, 2012
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We where digging up vegetables for Yell Show and I dug up tatties. We hade to wash the beetroot. We had to rub the tatties and we had to rub all the compost off and then after that we hade to find the same tatties and the same size and we hade to put it on a plate with a piece of paper.
August 22, 2012
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Wishbones Here is my book review.
August 22, 2012
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I did a book review about Wishbones. Please leave a comment of what you thought about the book.
August 22, 2012
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This a book reivew hope you like it !
August 16, 2012
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In the hollydays me Abby her mum her dad and we all went camping. Abby was looking after a dog called Charlie he
was so so cuit he was a gard dog. The next day we went to Abbys house for brekfast I had jam on toast. Next we played
with the moon sand then we had dinner we had spaghetti and then I went home.
