Burravoe Primary School

The Chatty Family

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One day in Singapore they were a family outside. The people in the family were the Mum and dad and a boy called Aaron.  They were very chatty. “Top of the morning to you!” Then they randomly said “Good Morning?” After they were a person who walked by and said “Who are you” The family said “The Chatty Family!” The person said “Ok?” Then afterwards another person came by and said “What a chilly day, Are you cold?” They said “We are fine!” The person said “Ok just asking!” Afterwards they Thought lets jump! After they Jamp they were exhausted!


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  1. Well done Neil; you have done as the prompt asked and had the characters talking to each other and you added them talking to others as well. I can see why they might have been asked if they were chilly – in the photo they do look grey and cold even though it is hot in Singapore!
    Remember to check that you have haven’t muddled there/they when you are writing!

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