Burravoe Primary School

Jake’s Scary Forest Adventure By Melissa


One scary night, Jake the dog went into the spooky forest. Jake can hear a “Shhhhhhhhh” sound. Jake smelled a rotten daisy and a dead fish. Jake saw a beach with a blue and rusty boat. The octopus came up out of the sea water. The octopus smashed the boat. Jake looked at the boat to see if there were any holes. Jake saw a mermaid out of the water. The mermaid asked “HELP ME!” so Jake helped her. Jake told the mermaid “I will get a bucket of water.” Jake asked “Can you help me fix the hole in the boat?” “Ok” said the mermaid. So the mermaid and Jake fixed the hole in the boat. “Let’s go on an adventure.” said the mermaid.

The mermaid said “My name is Jessie.”

Jake felt scared going into the boat. Jake got the bucket of water and Jake chucked the water to Jessie. The octopus came to see if there were any old boats to smash. Jake and Jessie went into a big dark forest. Jake was terrified that anything went wrong. Jake walked and he walked it was a magical forest. Jake got small that everything was big. Jake ran to the boat he tried to get up but the boat was too big. He was too small.

The octopus saw Jake in the rough sand and the octopus came closer and closer then the octopus splat his slime. Jake was covered with slime. Jake shouted “Jessie!”

Jake and Jessie walked back to the magical forest and turned back to his normal size.

By Melissa (P5)

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