In the night I walked down stairs and I opened the fridge, I ate the yummy chocolate inside. I went back in bed. In the morning mum said where’s the chocolate? Look there’s a lot of crumbs on the plate. Who was it? said mum. Was it you Melissa? It wasn’t me. Ok said mum. Leah did you ate the chocolate? I asked. The next night I walked down stairs then I said dad why are you eating the chocolate? The next morning mum said who ate the chocolate again? I know who ate the chocolate it’s dad, laughed Melissa.
Melissa’s 100wc
November 19, 2012 | 8 Comments
January 8, 2013 at 6:19 pm
Brilliant Melissa!!!!!!!!!
November 28, 2012 at 12:19 am
Dear Melissa,
Great story. 🙂 I like how you used the chocolate theme, I think it goes very well. Great job Melissa I counted the words and you have exactly 100 words and you have got heaps of puncuation and there is no spelling mistakes! so there is nothing that I can see that is wrong! 🙂 So thankyou for sharing your work with me Melissa.
from Lili 🙂
November 21, 2012 at 2:57 pm
I like this Melissa it was funny and really good can not wait to see your next one .
November 21, 2012 at 2:49 pm
Hi Melissa good writing
What year are you in?
Do you enjoy writing I do
Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Melissa!!
November 20, 2012 at 2:44 pm
YOUR DAD ATE THE CAKE HOW FUNNY!!!! 😀
HE WOULD EATEN SUCH A BIG CAKE
DID HE?
WELL AWESOME POST I REALLY LIKED YOURS!
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
TELL ME MORE ABOUT YOUR STORY
SO LONG!
CECILIA
November 20, 2012 at 2:36 pm
Dear Melissa,
Great story!
I love chocolate!
Is that exactly 100 words?
I look forward to reading your next story!
Sincerely,
Edward
November 20, 2012 at 2:33 pm
Dear Melissa,
Awesome Post!
Does your dad like chocolate?
I do not like sweets but my brother loves chocolate!
Do you like chocolate?
Sincerely,
Elysia
November 19, 2012 at 7:07 pm
Great story, keep up the good work and look forword to reading your next story.