Burravoe Primary School

Abby 100wc number 9

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A little piece of chocolate  was on a plate. It could be eaten by a mouse, a dog, a cat or your mum. Your dad could eat it, you could have a little sister she could eat it.  You could have a big brother that could eat it,  you could have  your friend  over he or she could eat it,  you could have a big sister that could eat it,  you could have a little brother that could eat. Actually it wasn’t any of those it was the person  that had had it in the first place ha very funny!


9 Comments

  1. This is a great idea for the 100WC this week, Abby! I enjoyed reading your work and especially loved how you listed all the animals and people who could have eaten the chocolate.

    Keep up the great work!:)

    Laura Team 100wc

  2. Good job abby now I am in the mood for chocolate! That was very funny you how you were listing all the people that could eat it a dog can eat it a cat can eat it I loved the last part:]

    from
    Julian

  3. Dear Abby,

    Nice job with the story .The last part was really funny 🙂 😀

    Sincerely,
    Janani

  4. Dear Abby,

    Nice job with the story .The last part was really funny 🙂 :D:):D:

    Sincerely,
    Janani

  5. Well done Abby!

    Amazing story, I have never thought of doing it this way.
    Jake.F

  6. Thank you for saying that you are very kind Abby Burravoe School.

  7. Nice job, Abby!
    Dreams are made of chocolate. What a lovely text!
    Kind regards,
    Diethild

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