Burravoe Primary School

Kerry’s 100 word challenge week 9

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Omnomnom oh sorry I had just finished eating a flake but it’s so weird because I ate it all but they are some left the next day. Can you keep a secret I think it’s magic don’t tell anyone so I am going to set a camera to watch it  they are a TV in my room so I can see what happens. Wait here comes my Dad he’s eating the flake and then opens another one but leaves some on the plate so they aren’t a flake eater is  my dad so  we don’t have to worry anymore phew.


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  1. Kerry,

    I love that you start with the sound of eating. I also really like that this character thought it was magic. I would like you to think about where sentences come to a complete stop.

    Keep writing. I hope to see you in the challenge again.

    • Why thank you I was trying to make sure that it did sound like she was eating and also it tryed to make it sound she was wispering

      thank you

      Fae Kerry 😀

  2. Dear Kerry ,
    Nice job typing your post . Keep up the good work ! :):D

    Sincerely,
    Janani

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