Burravoe Primary School

Mia 100 Word Challenge No.9

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Hello I am:

Name: Rebecca

Middle name: Becky

Surname: Adlington.

I love swimming. I won gold in London Olympics 2012. I love chocolate. I eat it every weekend. But when I went to my full bar of chocolate then there were only a quarter left. I thought that there was a rat in the house. I found the rat that took it and it was really fat a big. I am glad I found the thief of my prized possession. So I went to the shop to get more. When I got back from the shop I ate the chocolate.


4 Comments

  1. DEAR MIA ,

    CRANGRAGULATIONS NICE JOB

    SINCERELY
    JANANI

  2. HELLO MIA!!!!!
    GOLD MEDAL IS ALREADY VERY GOOD
    IF I WERE YOU I WOULD KEEP MY MEDAL IN A SAFE PLACE
    I LIKE CHOCOLATE ALSO!!!!!!!!!!!
    GOOD WORK! 😀

    SINCERELY
    CECILIA 🙂

  3. Dear Mia ,

    You did a really good job .You added a lot of detail and I liked how you called the rat a thief.keep up the good work

    Sincerely Ariana

  4. Dear Mia

    I really liked your story of swimming you added a lot of details like the part you won a gold medal and about the rat SO ALL THE BEST

    LOVE,

    PARTHAVI FROM MR. SMITHS CLASS 😀

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