Burravoe Primary School

The Sleepover

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On Saturday Lucy and I went for a sleepover at Gareth and Elsbeths h0use for a sleepover, then Abby came to play. We played jumpe jumpe jump on the beds. She stayed for dinner for dinner I had a boiled egg, beans, beacon, sausage and chips. Befor dinner I called mummy. Wen Abby left me and Lucy jumpt on the bed again and again intil it was bed time a we sleept well we never evin peepd in the morning .Gareth cookt the breakfist, I had a bacon butty ,Lucy had a sausage butty, Elsbeth stayed in bed for awile . I brot her a banana to eat but she didn’t eat it then we all went to grannys house and had tea then we telld gost stores then we went home and went to bed.


3 Comments

  1. Well done you’ve written a lot and made it entertaining for the reader – it made me smile and I love the drawing. 🙂 Mia has a point about reading it through, there are some things here that I think you would have seen to correct! Remember that verbs in the past tense often end in ed – so jumped.

  2. I reallyh like your picture of you all jumping on the beds. The story is really good too.

  3. I liked the story 🙂 but you next time you will need to read it through 8)

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