Burravoe Primary School

My Snowflake Poem




Snowflakes are falling

No grass for the sheep

Otters cant get out of the water

Water is frozen

Fishes swim under theย  water

Little people have snowball fights

And build a snowman

Kirk is covered in snow

Everywhere is snowy


  1. This poem has a real Yell feel to it with mention of the sheep, the otters and the fish in the loch. ๐Ÿ™‚ I feel very sorry for the sheep; I watch them from my window trying to dig down through the snow for some grass.

  2. Thank you Mia
    I thought it was brillent to.

  3. I think that poem is brilliant!! ๐Ÿ™‚

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