Burravoe Primary School

My Snow poem

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Beautiful snow

Lying around me

Icicles hanging

Zips up high

Zooming on my sledge

And singing christmas songs

Decorating the hill with ski marks


4 Comments

  1. I love your poem ,well done.

  2. Hi am Igor i like your poem because it is about winter and I like the season winter.

  3. I realy like your poem because its about the snow and I love the snow keep the good work

  4. Really good work, well done! I think that starting with such short line lengths is very effective and the last line paints a great picture in my mind. 🙂

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