Today we were to write a report of our sponsored walk.
The success Criteria that I used for this piece of work were:
- I must write the recount in newspaper format
- I must write in the third person
- I must include all the main points in correct order
- I must take a new paragraph for each main point
- I must include two witness statements
- I must include a closing statement
Written by John Grant P7
Sponcerd Walk
On the 4th of June the pupils of Inveravon walked from Cragganmore to Blacksboat and back. This was a Sponsored walk to raise money for their school trip for the end of term.
Colin Roberson their bus driver drove them to Cragganmore. The teachers and family members were waiting for them there. The adults gave the children some juice to drink because it was a nice sunny day.
The excited children set off on their 5 mile walk. Along the way they saw lambs, cows and grass snakes. The adults kept the children away from the snakes in case they got bitten.
The adults and children stopped at Blacksboat for a rest and a drink. More parents joined them with their dogs.
They set of again on their way back to Cragganmore. Lots of children were tired but they got back.
When they got on the bus to go back to school Aaron Rogers said, ‘’ I wouldn’t like to do that again because I was tired.’’
The pupils raised over £200 so they will get their school trip at the end of term.
Written by Alyce Farquharson P6
Inveravon Primary News
On the 4th of June Colin Robertson took Inveravon Primary to Cragganmore
Station for the start of there sponsored walk.
It was the second time for the walk .The last time they tried the weather was
terrible but today was very nice.
When they started there walk on the way they saw sheep, cows and lambs but
then they suddenly saw a snake.
Sinead Calder was very surprised to see the snake.
When we were at Blacks boat some more people came for the walk
They had a drink too.
The children started walking back . Lots of children ran back and they saw an other
snake the adults said ‘’do not to go near it.’’
When they got back everyone got on the bus and the children went back to school.
Written by Sinead Calder P6
