Hi Everyone,
For the last week or so, I have been writing a book. I’m not quite finished yet, but I have written a short blurb, I hope you like it!
Blurb:
Jeban was a prince from the Wildcat tribe in the middle of the war of the in-between, then everything changed when he got banished. Striving for peace and tolerance will Jeban succeed in his quest.
See you soon, byeee!
Joe 📄
The blurb definitely does make me want to read this book, Joe.
Please can you check your punctuation in the last sentence of the blurb?
Ooh I am very intrigued to read the rest of your story Joe. Your blurb gives away just enough to make readers want to know more- well done!
Looking forward to reading your story Joe. Sounds very exciting!
I love a quest. Great blurb Joe – sets the scene without giving too much away. Entices the reader…leaves us wanting to read more!!
Thanks, Miss Dale