Hi Hannah,
Thanks for sharing your writing. Great choice of recipient for your letter! Your letter is engaging and it shows an interest in the Queen’s wellbeing, as well as telling her about you, so that is a nice kind of letter to receive. You have structured your paragraphs appropriately. You have chosen to write about up-to-date topics, which is good.
When writing to the Queen the start and end of a letter are a little different to usual. Your start and end are fine for anyone who isn’t the Queen, Hannah. When writing to the Queen a letter should begin with ‘Madam’ and close the letter with ‘I have the honour to be , Madam, Your Majesty’s humble and obedient servant.’ Sometimes the Queen replies to her own letters, but sometimes it is her Lady in Waiting.
Hi everyone sorry not to post for a while
Hi Hannah,
Thanks for sharing your writing. Great choice of recipient for your letter! Your letter is engaging and it shows an interest in the Queen’s wellbeing, as well as telling her about you, so that is a nice kind of letter to receive. You have structured your paragraphs appropriately. You have chosen to write about up-to-date topics, which is good.
When writing to the Queen the start and end of a letter are a little different to usual. Your start and end are fine for anyone who isn’t the Queen, Hannah. When writing to the Queen a letter should begin with ‘Madam’ and close the letter with ‘I have the honour to be , Madam, Your Majesty’s humble and obedient servant.’ Sometimes the Queen replies to her own letters, but sometimes it is her Lady in Waiting.
Simba is very cute!