Hey everybody today I did my Five a day and then some simplifying fractions. Then I wrote a letter to invite my favourite Tiktoker to a school opening. I think I’ve put in all the right puncuation. I put guidelines on my letter with a pencil so it didn’t get messy and then went round my letter with pen and then rubbed out the pencil. By Esmaé
Confident, Creative Learners with Big Ambitions. Kind to each other. Kind to the Planet.
Another busy day Esmae.
You have made a good start on your letter to Addison Rae- to make it longer ( needs to be longer to meet second level criteria) we need to add detail…
What do you like about her Tik tok films? Do you try them yourself? Do you have a favourite?
Could you ask Addison questions? I wonder how long you have been doing…. ?
What could you tell Addison about Holywood to persuade her to come?
Could a dance contest be part of the visit? Could she lead a dance? Could you put on a dance performance with her?
Please can you work on your letter tomorrow and see if you can develop it further.
Thanks,
Miss Dale
I agree with Miss Dale Esmae- you have a good start to your letter and once you add in some more details and questions I think it will be a fantastic piece of writing. It’s obvious that you have taken a lot of time and care over the presentation of your handwriting- well done. Keep up the hard work, I look forward to seeing your letter again once you have developed it.