Hi,
I’ve done task 4 tourism in the Arctic tourism one. I hope you like my power point below about how to make tourism in the Arctic circle better.
I’ve added more info in my power point on Mrs Armstrong’s suggestion.
By Joe.
Confident, Creative Learners with Big Ambitions. Kind to each other. Kind to the Planet.
Joe, you should be really proud of this piece of work. You have given several suggestions for how to make Arctic tourism sustainable and you have presented the information concisely with good use of bullet points and headings, I can tell that you have done your research. You’ve chosen attractive pictures that will capture a reader’s attention. Because we are always learning I’m going to remind you that we would say “tourist guides have…” rather than “tourist guides has…” but I am being picky. This is a fantastic piece of work, Joe.
A fantastic piece of work Joe! Very well presented with well thought out facts.
…in fact, Joe, I am so impressed with your presentation that I feel like I can give you a challenge! You’ve said what needs to happen, but if you have a spare few minutes you could add a short list of positive things that would happen if everyone visiting did as you are suggesting, because if people can see how they could make a difference it might motivate people to do what you are asking. Just an extra challenge Joe, because I think you are up to it, don’t worry if you don’t have time.
(For example, “If everyone brought their own reusable water bottle there would be less plastic waste in the Arctic.”)
This is amazing Joe! You have included some really interesting facts and opinions. The layout and pictures are great too. Clear, concise and eye catching!
Great power point there Joe – it is well thought out and very well presented.
Hi Joe, I knew you could rise to the challenge! Super second edit. Very well done, big thumbs up!