3 Replies to “My writing”

  1. Your ingredient list is very creative and descriptive – well done! Just be careful where you put your numbers down the side of the page. Have a wee look at Larsson’s on the blog for an example of a good layout.

  2. Great work Brooke.
    I love that you’ve even told us how to serve it.
    Remember to check your 2’s & 3’s are the right way round.
    Good job.

  3. Hi Brooke,
    I like how you have given detail, such as serving the medicine warm. Well done using possessive apostrophes in the correct places, too. I would be nervous about collecting a lion’s tears! Great work, Brooke.

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