I haveĀ my medicine for a lion who has lost his roar .
by Brooke
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Your ingredient list is very creative and descriptive – well done! Just be careful where you put your numbers down the side of the page. Have a wee look at Larsson’s on the blog for an example of a good layout.
Great work Brooke.
I love that you’ve even told us how to serve it.
Remember to check your 2’s & 3’s are the right way round.
Good job.
Hi Brooke,
I like how you have given detail, such as serving the medicine warm. Well done using possessive apostrophes in the correct places, too. I would be nervous about collecting a lion’s tears! Great work, Brooke.
Your ingredient list is very creative and descriptive – well done! Just be careful where you put your numbers down the side of the page. Have a wee look at Larsson’s on the blog for an example of a good layout.
Great work Brooke.
I love that you’ve even told us how to serve it.
Remember to check your 2’s & 3’s are the right way round.
Good job.
Hi Brooke,
I like how you have given detail, such as serving the medicine warm. Well done using possessive apostrophes in the correct places, too. I would be nervous about collecting a lion’s tears! Great work, Brooke.