Hello Kye,
You used time connectives well in your instructions. I’m not sure if I believe you that it is tasty, with rotten cheese and spider legs in it! But if it makes the cheetah better I’m sure it wouldn’t mind what it tastes like. Well done!
Great writing Kye. You have come up with really imaginative ingredients for your potion. I’m sure it would help a lot of cheetahs with sore legs!!
You worked really hard on this Kye, well done. Still agree with Mrs Armstrong, it does not sound tasty – I don’t think 2 pieces of chocolate is saving that rotten cheese flavour!
Well done for having a go at creating a recipe for a medicine for a ‘Cheetah with a sore leg’ Kye. You have worked hard.
Hello Kye,
You used time connectives well in your instructions. I’m not sure if I believe you that it is tasty, with rotten cheese and spider legs in it! But if it makes the cheetah better I’m sure it wouldn’t mind what it tastes like. Well done!
Great writing Kye. You have come up with really imaginative ingredients for your potion. I’m sure it would help a lot of cheetahs with sore legs!!
You worked really hard on this Kye, well done. Still agree with Mrs Armstrong, it does not sound tasty – I don’t think 2 pieces of chocolate is saving that rotten cheese flavour!
Well done for having a go at creating a recipe for a medicine for a ‘Cheetah with a sore leg’ Kye. You have worked hard.