WOW – he scrutinised the alpine garden…great vocabulary Reece!
Loved your story – good detail.
You must be exhausted after all that hard work – time for some lunch!!
Thank you Mum!
Reece this is such a super piece of writing! Your word choice is brilliant, and I notice how hard you’ve worked to put connectives and openers in. Wow!!! Thank you!
Fantastic story Reece and great choice of words. Well done !
Amazing writing Reece!! I’m glad Loopy managed to find all of his spots. Fab photos too.
What a great piece of writing, Reece – well done! I’m glad Loopy found his spots.
This is a fantastic piece of writing Reece!! I am so impressed by the vocabulary you have used, the details you have included and your handwriting. Great photos too! I bet you are all glad that Loopy found his spots again.
WOW – he scrutinised the alpine garden…great vocabulary Reece!
Loved your story – good detail.
You must be exhausted after all that hard work – time for some lunch!!
Thank you Mum!
Reece this is such a super piece of writing! Your word choice is brilliant, and I notice how hard you’ve worked to put connectives and openers in. Wow!!! Thank you!
Fantastic story Reece and great choice of words. Well done !
Amazing writing Reece!! I’m glad Loopy managed to find all of his spots. Fab photos too.
What a great piece of writing, Reece – well done! I’m glad Loopy found his spots.
This is a fantastic piece of writing Reece!! I am so impressed by the vocabulary you have used, the details you have included and your handwriting. Great photos too! I bet you are all glad that Loopy found his spots again.