Hi everyone
Rory here.
I looked the words up in the dictionary and made some sentences. Here they are.
1. Upon completion of my school work I will get to go and play.
2. While in the playground I saw a collision between Kohdie and Carson.
They both hurt their heads.
3. Home schooling has some limitations because we don’t have everything a school has.
4. Mummy ran frantically around the house trying to get us ready for school.
5. I asked my cat what’s the purpose of your whiskers?
6. I broke an ornament and it put me in a bad situation.
7. I humbly ask you to stop thumping your feet.
I also started working on my super hero. I would like to share my description of his powers, his suit, his back story and his arch enemy. I will make my comic strip soon.
My hero’s name is Vulcan. He is a human who gained the power of a volcano. These powers include creating fire, lava, heat vision, earth quakes, fire rain and flying.
Before getting his powers Vulcan was an explorer. He was searching for the worlds biggest volcano but fell into a cave. In the cave he found a floating ball of lava. He touched the lava ball and it knocked him out. When he woke up he was on fire and discovered his new abilities. He made this cave into his base and designed it to look cool.
Vulcan spent the next few years being a super hero until one day a new bad guy came from space to cause trouble. His name was Citron. Citron was made of liquid metal. Vulcan fought Citron and chased him from earth.
They came to a planet called Griffin and the people who lived there were griffins too. They helped Vulcan by giving him a magic sword. The sword could go on fire and would come back if Vulcan threw it like Thor’s hammer.
Vulcan defeated Citron using the sword and then buried him in lava.
Years later people mining on Griffin found Citron’s skeleton and it came back to life. He flew away from Griffin to look for Vulcan and to get his revenge.
I’ve also designed his outfit, but you will see that in the comic.
I’m off to work on Sumdog now.
Bye for now
Rory.
Fantastic sentences Rory, well done! You have put a lot of thought into creating your superhero, I can’t wait to read your comic strip.
Wow Rory super sentences and great descriptions of your Superhero.
Great detail in your superhero Rory – I look forward to seeing what costume you have designed for him. Keep up the great work!
Miss Dale
Great detailed superhero description and back story. Can’t wait for the comic strip!
Fantastic description of your superhero Rory. I am really looking forward to seeing his suit and reading your comic!
That’s fantastic Rory – well done. Your sentences are great and your description of your superhero is brilliant. I’m looking forward to the comic strip.