Hi everyone
Today after maths and Hungarian I wrote about my garden. Here is a picture of the writing.
Mena!!!!!!!
Confident, Creative Learners with Big Ambitions. Kind to each other. Kind to the Planet.
Confident, Creative Learners with Big Ambitions. Kind to each other. Kind to the Planet.
Hi everyone
Today after maths and Hungarian I wrote about my garden. Here is a picture of the writing.
Mena!!!!!!!
What a fantastic piece of writing Mena! I have a really clear idea of what your garden looks like because of the description you used in your writing! Well done.
Great detailed writing, Mena. Well done!
Fantastic writing Mena! I love your fairy garden. It looks very magical with the lights on!
Your fairy garden is gorgeous Mena, and the writing is excellent quality – great work with the spelling, punctuation and description 🙂 Your challenge next time is to mix up your connectives – try and get a “but” “because” or “so” in there.
Your fairy garden looks magical, Mena and that’s a nice piece of writing about your own garden.
Fab piece of written work Mena and I love your fairy garden- it looks amazing! 🙂