P5-7 Braemar School

One day they were a boy called Alfie he was seven years old and lives in Edinburgh. And one day Alfie went school but what he didn’t know that his friend had a bit of cold. And when he got home Alfie didn’t feel well  so he drank some juice and felt better.

Once there lived a pair of scissors. The scissors were navy blue and the scissors were called Navy. Navy’s favourite food was fish and chips. Navy’s job was to stand in a scissor rack all day and let people use him to cut things up with. One day he felt really ill. Navy did not know why he was ill. For three days Navy felt ill on the fourth day he went to the doctors. The doctor said you could die so Navy spent the rest of his life in hospital or at home resting.

“and so it is true, he is ill.” (The name’s Jeff) A alien came to earth and invaded China. Most people hated him but some didn’t because they liked how they now know that there are other things in space. He was all happy…until he drank poison! He fainted is slow motion and it was really weird because he looked at someone and fainted. The people that liked him called a ambulance really fast so he wouldn’t die. The ambulance came but said “I’m sorry, but no.” The end…Or is it? Who knows, the alien could be alive or no?

One day, there was a cute dog called peanut.

He was five years old and he was a border terrier.

He was playing with his toys and spinning round so much, he felt really ill!

Peanut’s owner found out and took him to the vet.

The veterinarian said he was fine, so he went home and fell asleep.

He woke up an hour later and… he felt cured!

He was so happy that he ran to his owner and licked her so much that she started laughing!

A couple minutes later, it was dinner time.

he ate his food delightedly.

One day there was a baby polar bear and had to grow up on his own because his mother died. He had to fight for his food but one day he could not find any food and he felt really ill. Then something came out from the water from far away. It looked like his old friend SNOWY. He was his best friend and he had to leave the snow cabin and he went to the ice hut. He told him how his mother had died. He said come with me and they took into shelter. thank you good friend.

100 word challenge  

The battle of doom 

One day on the battlefield he felt really ill and then he died he was the leader of the enemy team. The enemies in their rage attacked the good guys and they fought back the enemies were armed with tanks and snipers, but the good guys had better they have SNIPER RIFLES! Battle was with no end but eventually the good guys brought in the Air Force and they dropped atomic bombs on the bad guys. To celebrate the good guys let of fireworks. 

There was a dog called Jay. he liked to play fetch with his owner Lucas. who was fun, but Lucas once went to a train station then when he came back. He felt really ill. And jay was sad but then jay found another dog called Sophia and Sophia was a street dog. so, Jay led her to his home Lucas was just getting ready to go to his friend’s house. But he let Sophia and Jay go with him. They enjoyed it Sophia and Jay enjoyed the dog food and then Lucas got cured by the doctors. The End.

…If only it was a bit smaller… I could take my electric wyvern for a trip into the nearby cave. If only I could find the mythical food but that’s only a myth so it’s probably not a real but it’s worth a try. The next day I went to the beach and found a bottle which contains a map. On the map it said map to mythical food tree so I rushed to my electric wyvern but I looked closely at the map and I have to cross death valley. When we reached death valley in the distance I can see the tree and corrupted wyverns the most deadliest of all the wyverns. We are heading into Death Valley we nearly died but made it and and my electric wyvern got smaller the end.

…If only it was a bit smaller said tomboy Bets. It was the day they were getting their new pet elephant. Bets and her mum were so exited to get  their new elephant. Why do you want it to be smaller asked her mum. So that it can sleep in my bed replied Bets. Her mum laughs. You  cant sleep with an elephant. Once they had finally got their elephant Bets said I think we should call it  Pip short for Philip. That is a good idea said her mum. So Pip spent a happy life getting into trouble and having fun. 

If only it was a bit smaller,my Zebra could fit in her cage.

My friend keeps on asking me why the size matters, and i keep on telling her the size matters because then zoe has to sleep on the couch!

I really wish she had clean hooves so i don’t have to by a new couch every day!

It was night time,somebody was knocking at the door.

She opened it, a old lady was there.

I have a feeling you want to shrink something said the old lady.

yes it is,ok i’ll go head and shrink it.

Don’t hurt her !

And they were never spoke about again