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100 word challenge

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One day, there was a cute dog called peanut.

He was five years old and he was a border terrier.

He was playing with his toys and spinning round so much, he felt really ill!

Peanut’s owner found out and took him to the vet.

The veterinarian said he was fine, so he went home and fell asleep.

He woke up an hour later and… he felt cured!

He was so happy that he ran to his owner and licked her so much that she started laughing!

A couple minutes later, it was dinner time.

he ate his food delightedly.

2 Comments

  1. Hi Maya,

    I love your story! Peanut is a very cute dog, maybe it was because he spun so much that he didn’t feel well. Great writing for the 100 word challenge.
    Keep writing, Maya!

    Carina Zhang (Team 100WC)

  2. Hello Maya! What a great name, “Peanut” is for a dog. I think it immediately makes you think of a fun loving, friendly dog. Your first few sentences also show this and then you introduce the drama into your story by making the dog sick. Thank goodness for Vets. I can almost see the dog wagging his tail after he woke up. Eating his food is a sure sign that the dog is well again. This is a delightful story. Thank you.

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