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The ill alien


“and so it is true, he is ill.” (The name’s Jeff) A alien came to earth and invaded China. Most people hated him but some didn’t because they liked how they now know that there are other things in space. He was all happy…until he drank poison! He fainted is slow motion and it was really weird because he looked at someone and fainted. The people that liked him called a ambulance really fast so he wouldn’t die. The ambulance came but said “I’m sorry, but no.” The end…Or is it? Who knows, the alien could be alive or no?


  1. Hello Lucian! It is interesting the different opinions shown to the alien. It would certainly be evidence that life existed elsewhere, wouldn’t it? It would be good to know if aliens were friendly too. I thought your story showed how different people react to change or even perceived danger in their lives (some people still wanted to save the alien, when others didn’t want him to survive). Well done.

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