Burravoe Primary School

The Disappearing Girl

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One day a girl called Elsie went into a factory of powers. She saw all the people making all the different types of powers. She was very curious what would happen if she drank one of that powers. So, she drank one. “I feel a bit different” she said, and she went home nobody seeing her. When she got home, her mum said: “Elsie! Time for dinner!” her mum looked everywhere and said “but where did she go? She shouted. “Mum!” “I am right over here!” She said and touched her head, so she wasn’t invisible anymore.


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  1. Hi Rachel! This sounds like a superhero origin story for Elsie. I wonder how her mother reacted to finding out she had acquired this power? Would she be shocked or impressed?

    Great work here and keep writing!

  2. Hello!
    I enjoyed your creative story with this week’s prompt! One question I have is if Elsie knew she would turn visible again when she touched her head or was it a surprise to her?
    Keep your words & creativity flowing!
    Francine (Team 100)
    Twin Cities, Minnesota USA

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