Burravoe Primary School


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One night in an exceedingly small town a boy called Thomas was trying to escape a school. It was 9:32pm and Thomas needed Somone but who or what was that? The answer was a hidden tray but he also needed someone to help him find it. he heard some echoing footsteps. There was a girl and boy. The boy was Alex the girl was Kate. “But where did it go?” she shouted. Thomas realized who it was. “Oh hello “Alex said “hello” Thomas said back. Then Thomas accidently stepped in the tray they were looking for’ then it disappeared.

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  1. I like the way you help the reader share Thomas’ confusion by only telling us fragments of what is going on. That said, I hope you write some more of this story, because I’d like to know.

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