Burravoe Primary School

The young eventer 

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The young eventer 

Once there was a girl that lived with her dad in a lab. One day she asked her dad if she could make a robot. Dad, can I make a robot? It would be cool! Said. Yes, but we need lots of metal. Said Dad And there was enough metal. Here. Said dad. It only took 3 weeks. Dad, I am done. said. Wow! Said Dad watch this! It will take off! But then suddenly, it didn’t. It just wouldn’t take off… Then BOOM!!!! It did! Yay! Yay! And It flew in to the air. 


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  1. Hello! How exciting it would be to make a robot! I would have no idea how to do it. I like how you created the tension about whether the robot would work or not. Well done.

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