Burravoe Primary School

Underwater

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Underwater

One blue moon in a gloomy forest there were dry sticks lying on the ground. The trees had scary faces on them. Just then a dog jamp out of the trees and landed on a twig, the sound it made was SNAP! He ran out of the forest onto the beach, he could hear a noise that sounded like splash and then again splash so he ran to the sound. It was an octopus splashing the water. In the distance he could see a mermaid on a rock. The dog jamp into a brown, wooden boat that was on the beach. He pushed the boat into the sea and rowed away to the mermaid. The sea was bumpy, rough and there were lots of bits of drift wood but the dog got there after all. The mermaid said I know where there is an underwater kingdom. The dog said I can’t breathe under water, the mermaid giggled she said “of course you can” the dog shacked his head. The mermaid said hold my hand then you can breathe.  So they went under water the dog could see the kingdom they were mermaids and mermen he could fell slime seaweed the seaweed was riling. Were a village and a castle in the castle they were a king the king the king shouted out load to the dog. The king said go to the dungeon.  Then he claimed his voice. The dungeon had mossy bits on the walls, there was an old mermen. The dungeon had a room.  He went in the room the dog smelled smoke and he felt hair it was an old man it was not a merman he was smelting swords and axes. Before the dog leapt out of the dungeon, the dog replied I saved a mermaid it was your daughter. The king shouted will you go home now the dog said is there an evil monster around here? The king said there is an octopus. The dog swam up to the octopus the octopus was not there the octopus was hidden him. He talked to the octopus the octopus was trying to be friends with the mermaid. So everything was ok so then the dog went to the forest and back home he loved playing with the mermaids but he loved his owner because the play ball not sewed but the dog loved any of it.


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