Burravoe Primary School



I went to the beld  a   bear work  shop  I  have a  dog called  Bob.  I went  pezza hut makoet cheese.  Im at the plane to Aberdeen.  I had  a kergn on a  jakit. i bI  a  book   and  DaD   pay   the   book    and  I  goo   home  and  I  rant   shop.   went   slep  In  thebed .  Im wakup  I  goo  shop  and I  went  baak  home


  1. Hi Neil, my name is Jonathon and I am in Mr.Miller’s class. Your story sounds very fun . Going to the Build a Bear workshop sounds very fun too . I’m pretty sure you had a great time at the workshop. I think it’s cool to have a dog I also have a dog too, but his name isn’t Bob. You’re story overall seemed like it was very exciting and you had fun, great job . 🙂

  2. Well done Neil!

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